If I lost an eye
And cried with only my right side
Would it hurt you?
If I lost my hearing
And talked funny
Would you not get annoyed
At shouting and having to do hand gestures?
If I lost one tooth
Or two from the front
Would you not find it funny how I say my s’s?
If I lost my arm or leg
And couldn’t walk or had one loose hanging sleeve
Would you still find me attractive?
If I had asked you to stop
If I had cried louder
If I ran faster to get some help
Would you expect me to come back?
Would you want me to still see the good in you?
Would you say you were sorry?
#meToo
Deep poem! In stanza 11 you have a grammatical error😊 God bless keep up the great writing.
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Thank you Tammy. You know when you are in an emotional stat while writing this is what happens. 💜💜
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You’re much welcome…oh yeah I know the feeling! But God is great!
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Deep deep! Well-done
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Thank you Deshi
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That was deep & so personal. Thank you for sharing, you have a gift for writing!
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I love writing. The more I write, I learn. Self expression is something that pushes me to write.
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This was clever
You’re an talented writer
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😊😊 oh thank you.💜
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This is wonderful! Great stuff my friend!
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Hey thank you my love. 💜
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I love this one ❤️ So strong as your writing always is. ❤️😊
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Thank you Suzanne 💜
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Wow! Exposing the elements of beauty in a human….
Nice one
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